Cold that seeps
Deep into your bones
Silence that boils
Right through your marrow
Darkness that invades
And bleeds you dry.
So why?
Why did you follow?
You knew what
The blackness brings.
You knew how
It would infect your mind.
You knew that
You’d never be free.
So why?
Why did you follow?
I know, little girl
I already understand.
But I need you to tell me
You need to say
Those words that
Will probably be your last.
So why?
Why did you follow?
That’s right…
Go on and tell.
Let your exhausted mind
Allow your body to rest.
You know the truth
Even if your soul is spared…
So why?
Why did you follow me
Into the dark?
Because your bones
Sweet Girl
Belong to me…
My first submission for the The Reverie Journal… For the prompt Bones.
Don’t be scared… it’s just October!
This is so awesome and gave me chills. The ending really made this piece!!!
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My first submission to anything, anywhere, Hasty!!! And it’s horror-y!! Lol!
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I am seriously honored and what a way to write for your first prompt. I really love it. AND isn’t that song awesome?
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Omg, yes! I’ve listened to it a couple times now.
I’m looking forward to more “submitting”…. (oh, geez)!
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Submit something for my 31 days of horror next. 🙂
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I plan on it. I have no pregnancy as an excuse for not putting myself out there (or any other lame excuses), anymore. So I’m going to do a lot more attempts at “publishing” now.
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Beautiful and haunting, Mel. Love these stirring lyrics too…they accompany your poem perfectly.
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It’s Ann incredibly haunting song. Stuck in my head all afternoon!
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Poignant and haunting.
🙂
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Oh, those last lines are so creepy. Beautifully done.
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Woah. What the hell. I was imagining it as if the grim reaper was talking to a girl ready to take her out. Hehe. 😛
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